Do the bones of your story feel broken?

Your beta readers told you something was off within your manuscript, but could not identify exactly what.

Or, perhaps your last romantasy editor helped create beautiful prose, but the structure of the story couldn't support its narrative weight.

If this sounds like your current fantasy or romantasy manuscript, you are in the right place.

Structure Your Scenes

About Mortal Magic Editing

At Mortal Magic, I help indie fantasy and romantasy authors sharpen their stories with bold, honest edits that don’t compromise their voice. Whether you’re building a magic system, crafting morally gray lovers, or weaving dark magic into your plot, I’ll help you shape a world readers ache to return to and characters they’ll never forget.

Editing Services Tailored to Your Writing Magic

Developmental Editing

I help you unearth the bones of your story and rebuild it stronger—deeper characters, sharper stakes, a world readers won’t want to leave.

Line Editing

Shape your sentences into spells. Line editing sharpens your voice and smooths the rhythm so your story sings.

Copyediting & Proofreading

Polish your manuscript with precise fixes to grammar, punctuation, and consistency—without dulling your voice.

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Testimonials

Lyx Robinson

USA Today Best-selling Author

"Megan has been an invaluable help as alpha reader and developmental editor for my ongoing series. She knows my books better than I do, which is incredible, and also insanely helpful when one is in the guts of the story and needs a well-informed opinion.

When reading new material, she carefully weighs it against prior events, and poses exactly the right questions I need to hear to better honour the characters and wider plot. When you are in that fiddly editing stage, it is so precious to have someone who can discuss your intentions with you at length, and who can tell you truthfully when that intention isn't coming across.

I write historical romance and the historical aspect can sometimes overshadow the romantic part; so she's been instrumental in shaping up my love interest's motivations, and bringing him back to the forefront of the story.

If you are in the process of redrafting your book, or if you're working your way through a long series, I could not recommend Megan enough for her capacity for synoptic thinking, and the deep care she brings to her work. "

Let's Bring Your Fantasy Story to Life

Want a story that lingers long after the last page? I’m here to help you shape it. Whether you're drafting your first novel or tightening your fifth, I’ll meet your manuscript where it is and take it further.

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